There were times when i wished time froze... i tired hard to hold back all those moments we shared.Foolish,i was when i wished i could stop time and make you mine forever...now i sit alone and still think how could those promises be fake ? were we never meant to be... how could destiny be so cruel. I remember those times when i laughed at what ever you said and now If you could hear me, I would say that your finger prints haven't faded from the life you have left behind...sometimes i feel broke inside but i have to hide... i wish you were here to see how life is without you and tell you that "i still breathe"... but i will never forget that night when i slept with Loneliness...Yes it is , Cruel to the eye
I see the way she makes you smile
Cruel to the eye
Watching her hold what,
Cruel to the eye
Watching her hold what,
used to be mine...
- Sakshi
it's beautiful! especially the last part :) so much so that i hardly noticed the puntuation (!) which i always do. :)
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At some point (or the other) we're all foolish ... I like! =)
ReplyDeletethank you :)
ReplyDeleteBeing a friend I'll tell you...that its awesome...u pulled out a good thought and gave it words...but u r jumping all around...your thought should have grace...glide from one thought to another...dont run...Its your thought so bless it with dignity...Super Work...hope to see more coming from you..!!!
ReplyDeletethanks ... il keep it in mind !
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