The hidden feeling

Hey guys! This is a poem I just wrote... Please do give me a feedback on how it is..

As I walk,
My shadow falls by my side
I feel gloomy inside,
But on the outside,
I barely show it.
I talk joyfully;
And dance to the music
Of your voice.
The rhythm bends
With slow pace
Into my ears.
But, if only you knew
I feel ignored.
If only you knew
I longed for you;
And you looked into my eyes,
You could notice
The fear of losing you;
And the tear drop
That rests deep in my eyes
And tries hard not to show
That I miss you.
If only you could see it,
I shall feel bestowed
And smile gracefully
As you realise..

-Madhu